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My Love Is Forever

In the late of the night
I'll be walking in your soul
You'll be living in my heart

With each beat
With each breath
We will be one


Dawn is coming near
I melt into you
You capture my spirit

Our hearts blaze with passion
Our bodies tremble with ecstasy
We are eternal love

My Sweetheart, My Love, My Everything
I'll forever love you endlessly

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Written August 22nd, 2005

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  • October 23, 2005
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    Amazing job you done here. I always enjoyed reading really good love poems and this is one is no exception. It flows well and is very well written, nice work.


  • True Love Gal
    August 24, 2005
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    This poem was just outstanding... Keep up the good work and never stop penning

    Jenn


  • ElusiveStar
    August 23, 2005
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    GOod To ME

    Amazin, Outstanding, Astonishing, I don't know what else to say. It was a GOOD poem. I adore it. I feel the same way right now and you put it into the most beautiful words with a nice rhthym and everything. The way it just blends in together is awesome. I adore it. Thank you so much for sharing that you have no idea what this meant to me. You made my day. love much and thanks again. God bless and bye.