Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

make it through the rain

if i was ugly
would you still love me?
if i was smelly
would you still hug me?
if i went crazy
would you support me mentally?
if i fell from somewhere high
would you be there to catch me?
if i said i love you
would you say the same?
if i wasn't skinny
would you be ashamed?
when we grow old
are we still gonna be together?
will you always be there for me
through any type of weather?
if i wasn't healthy, but sick, not rich, but poor
would you still be knocking on my door?
because if these things happened to you
i would be there
if u were sick,poor,ugly
i wouldn't care
because I love you
no matter who you are
white,black,albino,tan
I'll still be there to hold your hand
no matter what we say
I know we're gonna make it through the rain.....

Author notes


Written August 22nd, 2005

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • August 22, 2005
    Edit | Reply

    Great

    I luv it. It's heartrendingly pretty and it makes you think. I like the rhymes.