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Just Remember This

Just remember this
and let me be sentimental for a little bit

I know right now you don't feel loved
so lonely and wanting
wanting to give up and leave this life
leaving behind one of the people who loves you the most
and that's me

Hang in there, and reach out to the person
who knows what your feeling at the moment
regret, betrayal, and desolation
it hurts doesn't it?

Please just hang in there and don't beat yourself up
I cant stand to see you hurt
and I can't help but cry when you are
that's how much you mean to me

I cant help it that i love you
not in a romantic way
but the way i love a sister
sort of (hehe)

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Written August 22nd, 2005

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