Hey little me,
are you feeling alright?
I know things weren't perfect,
but just keep holding tight.
You're older and better,
wiser and stronger,
so you won't have to deal,
with the pain any longer.
Hey little me,
go ahead and cry,
let it all out right now,
lift your head to the sky.
Things are getting better,
but you have to hold on to,
release the kid inside,
and embrace the older you.
Hey little me,
stop hanging your head down,
do a mouth flip flop,
smile rather than frown.
Age has brought you farther,
than you've ever been,
life has granted you permission,
to live and laugh again.
Little me,
deep inside,
you no longer,
have to hide.
Author notes
MMMmmmmmmmm.........I think I like this. I'm not sure if its exactly what you wanted,but I hope its somewhat good enough! Great idea for a contest by the by! 
Written August 22nd, 2005
A contest entry
- Write a poem/letter to your younger self... by Daniela Violin.
300 points, ended August 23, 2005, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very well done. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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BRaVO! great write u have here. i loved the rhymes!!
You're older and better,
wiser and stronger,
so you won't have to deal,
with the pain any longer.
i loved those lines the best.
ive looked at other pieces of urs and your a great writer keep it up!!!!!!!
thanks for the comment on its jsut so hard i really appreciated it!!!!!!!
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I liked this a lot.. good luck..
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