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[ untitled at the moment ]

*when you're stressed, I'm stressed*

*when you're nervous, I'm nervous*

*when you're sad, I'm sad*

*and when you shut down from me, i jump to catch you*

*even if you don't want me to*

*i love you but when you shut down from me, i fall apart a little*

*but i don't even care*

*i just want you to smile*

*and then...*

*we'll both smile*

*and we'll be just a little bit stronger*

Author notes

im not sure what i should title this one. if you have any ideas please share them with me. if i pick yours i will give you credit. but i cant garuntee that i'll pick yours so no hard feelings [ i might still think of one on my own ].
Written August 22nd, 2005

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