Hushed music
rises
like fire scented smoke
memories rush
waterfalls
in my eyes
I remember
dancing
Spining bliss
skirt whapping my ankles
encased
in new shoes
Music reminds
suddenly
of forgotten mental notes
of eyes
his eyes
burning memory inside of me
Hushed music
rises
like fire scented smoke
memories rush
waterfalls
in my eyes
Beauty, love
champagne sparkling
like stars caught in a glass
is only a
musical memory
now
Turn the radio
off
it hurts when I remember
Author notes
Written August 22nd, 2005
A contest entry
- Picture Me A Poem by CarolDesjarlais.
300 points, ended August 23, 2005, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A beautiful angel, My angel...
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Only a musical memory now...
beautiful -
Beautiful reminisant piece. I saw one speling error I believe.
whapping, did you mean wrapping? Good luck.
Rose -
I love this, love the lines waterfall in my eyes and agree with Shewolf the last Stanza is perfection,great poem I thoroughly enjoyed ever word Wonderful
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This is beautifully nostalgic and visually sweet. Very nice entry! Dee
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Oh the last stanza is a real punch....well done, very well done. I like the stars caught ina glass as well.
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