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Dance

Alone under the stars,
slow songs playing softly
as we hold each other close.
The moon is our spotlight.

Time stands still, yet hours have passed.
the music continues to play.
We never let go.
Our light still shines.

We've been here for so long,
Our music has slowly faded.
But still, we hear it.
And we dance.

Author notes

Just a quick one I thought up layin' in bed, so I figured I'd add a little bit to it and toss it up, since I'm overdue for some writing. So... here ya go!
Written August 21st, 2005

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  • Readerrach
    November 19, 2005
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    beautiful...

    dancing = the best.


  • CoyoteLyle
    August 22, 2005
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    Thanks bunch Kayla!

  • Loveable Cherub
    August 22, 2005
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    Awe, it's so cute. And so wonderful. It's really good how short it is, too. Short, to the point, but not missing anything.