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"Unconditionally"




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So many people want something in return for their deeds, I've picked this word above all, because if it's not done unconditionally, it's done for gain in one way or another.
Written August 21st, 2005

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  • sampsonus
    March 13, 2006
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    exellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • drhemantvinze
    November 29, 2005
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    Have you had a kindness shown?
    Pass it on ------
    It was not given for thee alone!
    Pass it on----
    Let it travel down the years,
    Let wipe another's tears
    Till in Heaven the deed appears
    Pass it on------


  • Whispering Winds
    September 4, 2005
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    Timothy,
    Excellent choice of word my friend. This word fit you perfectly...and ... Unconditionally
    Much love always my friend,
    Tammy


  • poetryrocksmysox
    August 22, 2005
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    Brilliant!

    I have to agree with queenie, excellent choice for this one word contest, it says so much, and hard for so many to do things with this word in mind. It's Brilliant!

    You do have a Big Heart!

    ~poetryrocksmysox~


  • queenie
    August 22, 2005
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    you are so very right.everything these days seem to come with strings attached,even love.this is a word that i could easilt equate to you because of that big heart you have.i just would like to see it put in practice by more.this word is a winner.


  • poeticpieces
    August 21, 2005
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    Nice Word Choice!

    A point well made Daddio~ I think you said alot with this choice word you've picked...I like it, and the background is pretty too! So many entries in this contest, but I have to say, this should be up there high with the rest, for even there's really not a kind of Love divine unless it's unconditional...So you hit on a few key points here I can pick up, just by looking, and reading this word you've chosen...Great Job, Thanks for sharing you, much love Daddio~ The unconditional kind!

    -lil Tim

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