Oh White mug,
the way your kitten smiles up at me,
inspires me to write a poem about your beauty.
Oh, I just saw,
you have more beauty than I thought.
For you have two kittens upon your hard glass surface.
You take my breath away.
I want to stare at you all day.
NO,
I'm just playin',
I just wrote this poem for a contest.
Dumb mug.
Dumb kittens.
Author notes
I comented on your My Perfect Plan poem. it was good!!
Written August 21st, 2005
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sweet
hehe, fantastic work there. you can just change perspective like that. good luck.
Kiley -
lol thats really cute......love the love hate thing going on in this writing.....lol im still laughing..and thats wonderful..I love laughing and you did great....so is this writing....
Huggs
Malabu -
i felt so bad for the little kittens. i mean i know that they are on a mug, but gosh. this was a really cute poem. good job!
TranquilMelody
Christie Smith -
this is a great poem!! I love it!! it's funny and soo cute!! Great write!!
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HEHE. This poem was friggen tight
LOL
To much dawmn compotition in this contest
lol
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Very funny
very funny, i have a kitten mug just like this one so this made me laugh a lot! Keep writting coz this was brill! -
Funny
Nice, I really enjoyed it. It made me laugh! Thanks for entering the contest and good luck! -
Thank you!! I know i'm weird....(my SN proves that). I just saw the mug, and wrote this!!!! lol.
~Clara~
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omg lol I thought wow this person is weird.. then I read all the way and was lmao
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