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Wind

Wind cuts through me
Cold as my heart
Wind dances around me
Kissing flowers
Dancing among the rushes
Tearing my soul
Into pieces
Casting them into the wind

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Written August 21st, 2005

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  • Abram121
    December 22, 2005
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    GOOD

    hay, ilove that shot piece of yours,its cool.keep it up.