My enchanted little Music Box
plays out a fant-a-sy ,
the Ballerina inside is sleek
and graceful, just like me.
It tolls a velvety soft refrain
and does console my rigid stance.
In satin and fur my dancer
continues to do her dance.
No putrid odor found 'round here
just a sweet aroma of musk .
I develop monocular vision
as it quickly approaches dusk.
The air seems to carry
a gingery vibrant spell.
Nothing is flavorless in my room,
I keep all my possessions well.
Author notes
enchanted
console
sleek
satin
putrid
musk
fantasy
monocular vision
gingery
flavorless
music box
tolls
Written August 21st, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Word Lists with a Twist (contest) by JM Kenyon.
300 points, ended August 22, 2005, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Phenomenon #2 by Ryno.
300 points, ended February 9, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like the imagery in this. It appears to have some random double-spacing, or is it just me or is it just the background. Thanks so much for entering into Prewrites, good luck.
~Ryan~ -
Excellent!!!
Once again you have captured such beauty with your words. That you can take a list of random words and create something like this speaks to your talent and heart. May your inner beauty always shine through in your words. Very easy to read and so well done. -
I enjoyed this Sharon, the little things which mean a lot a very nicely done poem which is beautifuly written Great job Sis:-)
Sherry ♥
Edited on Aug 21, 8:01 p.m. because ''. -
Wow, this is wonderful write..you choose great subject for the use of those words..and you did great job including all of them..good luck in the contest
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A gorgeous write. You've created a soft, sensual, sweet atmosphere with your words so that each phrase clings to the mind. Beautiful flow and excelent word usage. Best wishes and
s... ~genielassie~
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