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You Can't Go

NO! NO! NO!
You can't go!

You have no idea,
What you've done to me
Open your eyes
Take a look and see

You have touched me in places
I never thought anyone could reach
Without you, my world is nothing
Simply just cold and bleak

NO! NO! NO!
I won't let you go

You held my hand
And became  a very good friend
I will not stand by
Will not allow this to be the end

You have found a part of me
A piece I lost so long ago
Opened it up and helped me see
That HE still loves me so

NO! NO! NO!
I refuse to let you go!

You once told me how your heart bleeds
And know now if you never returned
Not once, not twice but three times
Will my heart have been burned

You have brought back
Something others could not
For you to leave now
Would be all for not

NO! NO! NO!
You can't go!

You have not completed
What you set out to do
Your mission is not done
I still need you

I can't finish what you started
Not alone anyway
On my knees I pray
"Oh Please, God, Don't take my angel away!"

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Written August 21st, 2005

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  • DarkMysticMoonlight
    August 22, 2005
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    Beautiful! absolutly beauitful! i have felt this way sometimes. This poem is so well written, and as StarvingAuthor said, you are a teriffic writer! Great Piece


  • StarvingAuthor
    August 21, 2005
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    absolutely amazing. you are a terrific writer. i've felt this way many a time. great work!

  • LastingEmber
    August 21, 2005
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    what a beautiful picture. the poem goes so well with it, wich is of course what you intended.