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your just like her

Dont break my heart
An turn me out.
You left her,
Because she shut you out.
An now your doing the same to me

Your not any better then she was to u
You say you hate her
an you never think about her.
So then why are you being just like her?
Dont shut me out
An break my heart
Just because your not over her.

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Written August 16th, 2005

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  • flowerpower1220
    August 22, 2005
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    ryans not being a total 'dick' to me.that poem was just about....well i think you know who its about.but i dont care.her an her boy toy broke up so now shes trying to be my friend?hell nah!!!!!im more scared of ryan tellin her off then me.but yeah.ill c u in a couple hours...love yas bye


  • trustworthy213
    August 21, 2005
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    oh kitty i knoe ehi this is about...if hes being a dick give him time honey....if he continues ill kick his ass!!!! i have to..its my big sister duty!!!
    love you
    mimi

  • hope is all i have
    August 21, 2005
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    wow i kno how this feels...and i kno it sux at the moment but things heal itself...it was great thank you for your comment and yea i loved this keep up the good work
    tons of love

    -prettygrl519

  • learn2luvme
    August 21, 2005
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    wow this poem really gets itself across well, an the emotion it holds tells its own story.
    niki