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One Chance



I ask only for one chance
Let me show you the passion I hold within
Let me unleash the fire within my soul

Just one chance is all I ask
Let me take you to paradise
Let me lift you into ecstasy

One chance is all I need
Let me do what no other woman can
Let me fill you with pleasure

One chance, just one
Let me show you the love
Let me show you the desire

Please, just one chance
Let me be the one to fuel your desire
Let me be the one to grant your every wish

One, just one, only one.....
Let me be your everything
Let me be your hearts desire

One chance is what I ask for
One chance is all I need

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Written August 21st, 2005

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  • Molly Densmore silver member
    August 21, 2005
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    This is really good, your expression of wanting this person is with so much feeling from your heart. very nicely done and nice flow. I hope you get that one chance. This was really a nice and descriptive write. thank you for sharing it.


  • August 21, 2005
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    This is so well expressed the angst for the last chance. Wonderful poetry.