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Perception of the Deer Dance

Endless common animosity
Paranoid of trust
Brainwashed all society
AKs in their hands
Services for the leader
Who strikes fear towards all
Nothing can be done
But parade in the sand
Scared to show opinion
They like to push the weak around
Allies of the devil
Feeble fingers ready
Showers of silver
A great show to view
One by one they drop
Innocence is gone
No way to see freedom
And they can never see our paradise

Author notes

"My name is fred and I live in a box."
Written August 21st, 2005

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  • Flipsidebabee
    August 25, 2005
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    Just needed to do something different. Thanks


  • August 24, 2005
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    seriously i love it! ^^


  • August 24, 2005
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    hah nice background! lol


  • August 22, 2005
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    ^^ yay thank you for putting that. And btw wonderful poem! thank you for entering

  • Flipsidebabee
    August 22, 2005
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    Oh duh!!! I just realized that I forgot to put my friend Fred in there!!!


  • August 21, 2005
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    Hey this was good, but im gonna have to pull you out so please re-read the rules...........i really dont want to......

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