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you've ruined us

How can one person ruin everything?
why cant you stand the fact
that im actully happy?
THe one perfect thing I have,
An you try to take him away.
You said we were friends
You said you didnt care about him anymore.
But just like everything else you've ruined....
you've ruined us

Author notes

its about this stupid b**** that cant stand the fact that shes noe with him anymore...hes mine an she needs to step!
Written August 21st, 2005

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  • bleedingarms
    August 24, 2005
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    wow, yea this one stood out! Great write, lots of emotion, and it was presented well! keep it up, but i hope that that person stays away! take care ~kiersten~