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Blackened Heart

Tears streaming down my face
Thoughts of you flood my mind
Alone in the cold darkness....
My heart aches from the loss of you

My world shattered around me
My heart crushed,
Battered and bruised
Wounded and bleeding,
Living now in total chaos

What did I do?
What did I say?

Lost in chaos,
Alone and scared
My heart bares a gaping hole
No one can fill.......but you

The time has come
For my heart to love no more
It has grown cold and dark
Vowing never to love again,
Reaching within  
Removing my heart

May it forever be a symbol
Of what once was
A blackened cold symbol
Of the love I lost

My one true love,
Shall never be again.....

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Written August 21st, 2005

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  • Harleqyn
    August 21, 2005
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    this is really very sad. it strikes and emotional note with me,a nd im sure with anyone else who reads it. the picture is beautiful, as are the words. great write.