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I'll lay my love
on a tray
Gently pass it under a
door of glass
Into that cage of yours
filled with rage

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Written August 20th, 2005

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  • Sam-I-Am
    May 23, 2006
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    This kind of though is why women are said to be the smarter gender.
    It puts into words the taming of the wild tiger that is male rage.
    simply beautiful.


  • rite
    August 21, 2005
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    This type of female wisdom is powerful enough to make any angry young man stop raging, except perhaps the incurably stupid ones. I've the good fortune of experiencing such female compassion a myriad eons ago and I still remember the gentile grace of gestures like the one expressed in your words. Thank you for creating and sharing. Take care,

    Rage