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Angelic Guide

Tear filled eyes
Red and puffy
Crying for hours
Enduring the pain
Reliving the embarrassment
Engulfed in vulnerability
Enraged by lack of control
Ashamed of mirrored reflections
Casting judgement upon self
Never accepting
The deeper definitions
Of self description
Covering your eyes
To the obvious
Obstructions of true beauty
Upon tiled floors
Drop after drop
Crimson liquid pools
Draining the essence
Taking along the shame
Ending the embarrassment
Shattering mirrored reflections
Of a lost soul
Vulnerable  and alone
To proud to ask for help
To scared to continue on
Six feet under
In a cold dark grave
Lies the truth in reality
Dressed in white
Adorned with flowers
Laying in wait
Of an angelic guide

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Written August 21st, 2005

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  • Allura
    August 21, 2005
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    From death cames truth.

    Allura


  • August 21, 2005
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    Wow. You did the desciption of this pic good! I've heard spirit guides but not angelic guides.