As my eyes watch a falling star
drifting down to earth
my mind starts wondering
what is my life really worth
I start to recall all the days
my life meant nothing at all
always looking for the answer
before I heard God's call
Many years seemed like Heaven
some years seemed like hell
I hid my tears from my family
I learned to hide pain very well
I wonder as I watch the star
as it falls from Heaven above
could it be God sees me cry
and is sending down his love
God knows it's only recently
I knocked upon his door
he knows how much I need his love
so he's sending me some more
God's love will make me strong
as I stumble along the way
when I feel I need some more
I will ask God when I pray
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Written August 21st, 2005
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Thank you so much for the lovely comment. It is much appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. It is so appreciated. Taker care. Sandy
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this is marvelous, I am deeply touched that we share a love for my saviour He has brought me a mighty long way and his praises shall forever be in my mouth, thank you for this grand opportunity to praise God and to meet someone who loves the Lord as I do, May God alway bless you and all that come in contact with you!!
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Sandy this is such an uplifting write. I really am touched each time I get to come read your words. You are so gifted to share God's love here...and within your everyday life. God bless you.
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Thank you Don. You always leave the nicest comment my friend. It is always a pleasure to hea6 from you. Take care and Gpod Bless. Sandy
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Beautiful Sandy!!!!
This poem clearly shows God's message of love that He has bestowed on you. It flow really well and give the reader a clear picture of your desire to have more of what God has for you. Praise God!!!!! BRAVO!!! I have a poem called Falling Stars that youmight enjoy if you get a chance. -
I love your poetry. you are such a great poet!! This poem is so beautiful and has so much meaning. I love the picture too!! I really enjoy spirtual poetry. Thanks for sharing,
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Wonderful poem. I love how you incorporated the falling star. Great job. ~Katie
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I really liked this poem. I could see a lot of it in my head. I like how you turned the falling star as a symbol of his love. I can also relate to this quite a bit. Well, this was an awesome poem and I L-0-V-E-D it. Keep up the fantastic work.!!
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very nice work Sandy. I like the image of the falling star, and God sending his love...
Michael
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