I’m in my own
little make believe world
where flowers grow
and never die
where rainbows shine
across the sky
with out a drop of rain
or cloud upon high
creatures
both great and small
live together
and never fall
into darkness
or despair
I see love
everywhere
~LR~
Upon the night
My heart
spreads it's wings
and flies away
With blissful thoughts
and romantic dreams
Some where between
you and me..
Bringing to life
The hopes
of a new days dawn
Breathing in
the misty calm
Where rainbows blossom
Like that of a new born
babies yawn
~rb~
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Written August 21st, 2005
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Aw, this is so beautiful. I feel like going outside and just laying in the grass and looking up at the stars and just let my mind go off with the wind. (as soon as I finish reading everyone's things, I'm going to do that)
Beautiful write, it was so fairytale like and just... wow. Made me think of my childhood days... *sigh*
Much love
Always and Forever,
~Kendal -
i love this.......there's nothing like a make believe world, where there is peace and happiness all around. if only one day that made up world would come to life....everything would seem like heaven. this is truly a great write.
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I hope I inspire to keep writing not to only write better. Everyone writes differently. As long as you are writing, to yourself you will get better and better. Thanx for the comment hun.
Hugs, Lady Raven -
perfect
I really loved this you inspire me to want to be a better writter thanks Lady Raven
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This is absolutely beautiful, I just love the feel of this poem and the picture as well. This is all so beautiful, I wish I lived in a world as this.
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White coats and butterfly nets indeed. We are going to wind up in the same padded cell! (inside joke) Looks like lullabies are contageous. And yet it is just so wonderful to put all of the "real life stuff" aside and be innocent even for just a little while.
All in all, I loved the imagery...rainbows from a baby's yawn - awesome as well as the sheer sincerety of the first stanza.
Also good to know I'm not going to be alone at the asylum. Kudos on another winner! -
Absolutely beautiful.
Firstly...lovely page. It adds to the poetry. A delightful photo...and an amazing poem. GREAT JOB! I know this place. I haven't been there...but I long for it. it's called:
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wow this poem was beautiful i dont think i could say anything else than what everyone else said about the poem it had great imagery and was an absolutly awesome write
vampiry julianna -
the tottal oppisite of my world, but the perfect desscription of what i wish i could see. nice job
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some beautiful imagery, I think this irregular structure would work better in this instance without the rhyme.
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can you tell i like it?!
Oh!this was so beautiful!all your imagery,the flow,the style..hell!even the font color was pretty!it matched!this was fantastic, your an amazing poet..never quit.You've got some serious talent!wow..
Alea
P.S.- gorgeous pik too! -
Reminds me of elves.
Sounds like a Spring day in NY where I'd done way too many intoxidants the night before and some of the feelings of general wellness held through. I wish life was more similar to your work than a great fantasy novel. Great work. -
Awesome!
Lovely! Very inspiring write! A great read for me as well, for I have been very "down." this cheered me up! Thanx! LadyJayne -
This is very beautiful, it reminds me of classic songs like "What a wonderful world" and "Somewhere over the rainbow". I somehow feel them as part of your inspiration, but I may be wrong. It is very pleasant and fills me with a sense of peace, tranquility and beauty - well done.
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