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Saturday, August 20th

August 20th 12 AM

I am sad today.
I lost a battle at midnight.
Temptation had a victory.
But shame did not reign the day.

August 20th 2 PM

I am sad today.
I purchased some new clothes,
Not much, but they were needed.
It was good to have a need met.

August 20th 7 PM

I am sad today.
I held a child in my lap.
It was such a delight,
For I love him so much.

August 20 8 PM

I am sad today.
I took an inventory of my soul.
My spiritual condition is good.
I am glad to see I've grown.

August 20th 9 PM

I am sad today.
I watched a delightful old comedy
Staring Cary Grant and Marilyn Monroe.
I so enjoy the classics.

August 20th 11 PM

I am sad today.
I miss my mentor, my friend.
He ended his life in May.
To whom do I share this day?

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Just processing the day.
Written August 20th, 2005

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  • marmalade
    August 26, 2005
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    By writing this poem you have shared your day with all of us on ap. I hope soon that you find happiness.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 21, 2005
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    sad~

    This is such a sad one
    Even though you bought new clothes and held a child, watched a comedy...but you were alone with no one to share it with
    This tugs at my heartstrings my friend....I am so sorry you are still coping also the loss of your friend
    Just remember I am here if you need to talk
    Penned oh so well but so sad
    Love n hugs
    Susan~~~