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My Gift To You

In the blink of an eye
You captured my heart.
In a fraction of a second
I became yours for the taking
Do to me as you wish
For I am  bound to you
Say what you like
For there is nothing you could say
To make me turn away
I will not run
Nor will I hide
I am yours
Mind, body and soul
Call me a fool
Call me what you will
A fool yes!
A fool in love.......
In love with you
I give you my heart,
A gift of love ...
A gift of light....
My gift to you
Forever shall I be
A part of you...
And you a part of me

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Celticmoon
Written August 20th, 2005

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  • Celticmoon
    August 21, 2005
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    Twas truly my pleasure. I am so glad you like it.


  • Lencio Rodrigues
    August 21, 2005
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    This is truly beautiful and straight form the heart. Thank your so very much for this and taking the time. My friend will be all so proud of this,

    Love and light,
    Lencio

  • Celticmoon
    August 20, 2005
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    Pay no attention to the guy in the pic sweetie.I don't even know him. Then again the woman isn't me anyway so doesn't matter.

    Besides I only put that pic up because I didn't have one of you and I together

    Thanks hunny glad you liked this piece.


  • Malabu
    August 20, 2005
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    wow...I wish some sweet bit o honey would say this to me...Im in real need for someone to hold me and look me in the eyes letting me know..Im the one..and Only! this is very provacative and easy to get lost in....perhaps more stimulating then I want to admit...thinking to myself...Oh how much I wish... lovely lovely love lust and desire moon....hey whos that guy in the picture..im jealous
    hUggs baby
    Malabu