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Love Hurts

How can I go on?
My heart beats no more
Torn from my body
Upon the floor it lies
Beating it's final beats
Slowly exiting this hurtful world
Hoping for a better place
A place where it can be free
To beat with another as one
To hold what it has desired
Yet has lacked to find
Each time false hope
Crashing down upon it
Crushing that last glimmer of hope
So fragile, yet unbreakable
But not undying
Final beats escaping
As it lies on the floor
Truly open now
For someone to step on it
Stopping it's beats forever
With no heart
Comes no more hurt
No more pain
Looking down
Upon my heart's final beats
My final tears shed
Now, my heart will no longer bleed

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Written August 20th, 2005

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  • Poetry eyes
    August 20, 2005
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    Woah. Amazing, very intense. I loved the word choice, and the way you put the things you said. Very...i cant find the words, but its very good!


    Love yah,
    Beffies

  • Dark Dead Roses
    August 20, 2005
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    camn i love this and i love the picture you have to go with it where did you get it? well anyways i love your poem keep up the great work.
    love always
    Dark Dead Roses