Sharpen a thought into
a tight focus;
As it gently unfolds,
consider the implementation
of this free thought
spiraling out of
control;
As it gathers momentum
it grows, steadily
surely;
Immense,this once small
item now warrants attention
and understanding;
Consideration at the least,
is offered willingly initially;
Until it once again becomes
the highlight,paramount escalating
out of reality, climaxing;
Shuddering to a sudden stop,
this thought becomes reduced
diminished, indefinable;
A nothingness..a thought,
rejected dismissed,
forgotten..obsolete.
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Written August 20th, 2005
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I like what you've penned. Sometimes the funny things we think make perfect sense in a weird way, and sometimes they are just one conglomerate of different subjects. But like a patchwork quilt, they all come together and fit perfectly because they all have a common thread-they came out of your mind. Good work on this, it was amazing to read.
I love it.
Keep your pen and paper handy dear poet, I think you will be using it more often than you think.
~katiebird -
I write what is in my head..sometimes it comes out as a jumbled mess..othertimes it gels..but it needs to get out
Thank you for your kindness 
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the shit
Well i decided to read some more of your work to see how good you are...im freakin impressed. I don't like most peoples poetry on here, its normally just not my type or to boring and plain for me, but i love this a long, it's definitly one of my favorites. Your a great poet and i love all your poems i've read so far. Always keep writing -
Thank you Mary for your kindness
..I would be delighted to read some of your works
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talented
wonderfull and I dont mean that broken computer, I think this poem is great it shows the real nightmare it is when a computer breaks the word you use totally decribed the insitdent it self. I thought this is brillant.
could you have a look at one of my poems and tell me truefully what you think as I'm trying to inprove my work. thanks so much -
Lol..yes you are right..a broken pc is never a laughing matter with me. Things get out of control But it,s fixed now and raring to go
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Thank you
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Interesting Ms Cutie, you have discribed an impulse with the enough detail to have me worry just a little about sharing a broken computer with you. - Ha - thank you.
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Some nice use of words but it didn't really grab me.
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