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Midnight Hunt

The moon full
The fog thick and heavy
The night air stagnate with fear
The night winds  howling through the brush

Running faster
Pushing forth
Staggering through the bushes
Stumbling against a tree

My heart racing
Pounding loudly
Nearly protruding from my chest
Echoing through the night

My mouth gaping
Erratic and raspy
Panting heavily
Gasping in total fear

My eyes widening
Peering
Watching
Searching for him

With no warning
From behind
A rope around me
Restraining me

Crying...
Screaming...
Begging...
Scared...

The slight glimmer  I see
A large silver blade
Slicing through the fog
Running across my chest

Begging for mercy
Watching the blood drip
Hearing him laugh
He's enjoying this

Terrified
Screaming frantically
Thrashing myself against the ropes
Hoping someone will hear

His huge hands moving
Running over my breasts
Grabbing my blouse
Ripping it from my body

The tip of the blade
Encircling my nipple
His hand gripping it
Slashing the blade across

Watching me
The blood pours from my breast
With his tongue
He licks it and laughs

With the blade
He cuts away my skirt
Dropping to his knee
Ripping away my panties

Spreading my legs
Using his hand
Inserting his fingers
Raping me

The blood covered blade
Tracing it over my thigh
Digging in the tip
Ripping it downward

His tongue lapping
Following the wound
Tasting my life draining
He moans in delight

Thrusting his hand deep
Ripping me open
Blood pouring down
His eyes widen in anticipation

Running the blade up
Removing his hand
Licking off the blood
Thrusting the blade inside me

Watching my face
Seeing the fear
It invigorates him
It calls to him

Using the blade
Pushing it deeper
Thrusting it back
Opening me completely

Binding my hands
Gagging my mouth
Cutting the rope
Throwing me to the ground

Laying upon my body
The blade held to my throat
His tongue runs over my bleeding flesh
His teeth sinking deeply into me

Kneeling back
Exposing himself
Grabbing my hips
Pulling me closer

Thrusting himself in deep
Filling my bloody and battered body
Violently slamming inside me
Removing himself from me

Moving near my face
Licking the tears from my cheek
The blade  digging into my neck
Removing the gag

Kneeling beside me
Self pleasuring
Exploding
Changing my screams to gurgles

Smiling at me
Leaning down
Biting my neck
Ripping  my flesh

Slowly he slides the blade
The flesh of my neck parts
Opening
Emptying the blood from my body

As I lay dying
He watches
He smiles
He laughs

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Written August 20th, 2005

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  • DancingShadowCorpse
    March 6, 2007
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    Brutally disgusting, great work. I can say this much, you definately met my expectations of this contest and you did it well. Thank you so much for entering this mentally disturbing obscene poem of yours. Thank you!!


  • Blazing White Wolf
    March 5, 2007
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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 19, 2006

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    Eeewww, how horrible... Obviously not a personal experience, though this kind of thing happens. I don't see how someones mentality can be like this, it scares me greatly... Thanks for sharing and I hope this stuff ceases, though I know this is an impossible wish to grant. Thanks for sharing well written as usual.


  • blkwidowsd
    November 16, 2005
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    Awesome!!! Vivid imagery, very descriptive, very powerful!!!
    Great Job!!!
    Thanks for entering, Goodluck.
    Best Wishes

    (¯`•.Tracey.•´¯)


  • Andy Stephenson
    August 29, 2005
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    That was descriptive! It seems like the victim would have perished about half way through the poem. "Vampire's Prey(The Story)" describes the encounter with my vampire from the victims point of view first person. You might like that if you haven't already read it.

    Andy

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