The moon full
The fog thick and heavy
The night air stagnate with fear
The night winds howling through the brush
Running faster
Pushing forth
Staggering through the bushes
Stumbling against a tree
My heart racing
Pounding loudly
Nearly protruding from my chest
Echoing through the night
My mouth gaping
Erratic and raspy
Panting heavily
Gasping in total fear
My eyes widening
Peering
Watching
Searching for him
With no warning
From behind
A rope around me
Restraining me
Crying...
Screaming...
Begging...
Scared...
The slight glimmer I see
A large silver blade
Slicing through the fog
Running across my chest
Begging for mercy
Watching the blood drip
Hearing him laugh
He's enjoying this
Terrified
Screaming frantically
Thrashing myself against the ropes
Hoping someone will hear
His huge hands moving
Running over my breasts
Grabbing my blouse
Ripping it from my body
The tip of the blade
Encircling my nipple
His hand gripping it
Slashing the blade across
Watching me
The blood pours from my breast
With his tongue
He licks it and laughs
With the blade
He cuts away my skirt
Dropping to his knee
Ripping away my panties
Spreading my legs
Using his hand
Inserting his fingers
Raping me
The blood covered blade
Tracing it over my thigh
Digging in the tip
Ripping it downward
His tongue lapping
Following the wound
Tasting my life draining
He moans in delight
Thrusting his hand deep
Ripping me open
Blood pouring down
His eyes widen in anticipation
Running the blade up
Removing his hand
Licking off the blood
Thrusting the blade inside me
Watching my face
Seeing the fear
It invigorates him
It calls to him
Using the blade
Pushing it deeper
Thrusting it back
Opening me completely
Binding my hands
Gagging my mouth
Cutting the rope
Throwing me to the ground
Laying upon my body
The blade held to my throat
His tongue runs over my bleeding flesh
His teeth sinking deeply into me
Kneeling back
Exposing himself
Grabbing my hips
Pulling me closer
Thrusting himself in deep
Filling my bloody and battered body
Violently slamming inside me
Removing himself from me
Moving near my face
Licking the tears from my cheek
The blade digging into my neck
Removing the gag
Kneeling beside me
Self pleasuring
Exploding
Changing my screams to gurgles
Smiling at me
Leaning down
Biting my neck
Ripping my flesh
Slowly he slides the blade
The flesh of my neck parts
Opening
Emptying the blood from my body
As I lay dying
He watches
He smiles
He laughs
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Written August 20th, 2005
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Brutally disgusting, great work. I can say this much, you definately met my expectations of this contest and you did it well. Thank you so much for entering this mentally disturbing obscene poem of yours. Thank you!!

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Eeewww, how horrible... Obviously not a personal experience, though this kind of thing happens. I don't see how someones mentality can be like this, it scares me greatly... Thanks for sharing and I hope this stuff ceases, though I know this is an impossible wish to grant. Thanks for sharing well written as usual.
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Awesome!!! Vivid imagery, very descriptive, very powerful!!!
Great Job!!!
Thanks for entering, Goodluck.
Best Wishes
(¯`•.Tracey.•´¯)
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That was descriptive! It seems like the victim would have perished about half way through the poem. "Vampire's Prey(The Story)" describes the encounter with my vampire from the victims point of view first person. You might like that if you haven't already read it.
Andy
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