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I think its time i let you go

im so confused again
i just dont knwo what to do
should i let you in again now
that ive seen you through a new view

you treat me like im a ghost
dont even listen to what i say
changing the subject on me
all i feel is betray

your not suposed to put me down
it dosent work that way
what happend to support
and being there day by day

im not gona let this hurt me
im not gona let you bring me down
im gona hold on and be strong
im not gona frown

i dont deserve to put up
with this bullshit, not again
ive learned from the past
it causes to much pain

so now i say good bye
i dont need you in my life
dont need that lieing
and i dont need the strife

ive been through enough
i dont need to add to it
so this is why i have to say
i believe its time that we split

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just another poem
Written August 20th, 2005

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  • carmel apple
    February 24, 2007
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    Bravo. This sounds personal? something that actually happend? good write, good job.
    Briana


  • xXbroken lullabyXx
    July 10, 2006
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    wow i really like this..its sad but i'm glad that you're getting away from him..u deserve somebody better than that..but great write i really like this..keep it up and hold ur head high no matter what!

  • rockon
    September 7, 2005
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    hey, i like this, its really well written, i'm sorry if u feel this way though keep up the good writing!


  • megz
    August 20, 2005
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    thanksso much for the coemtn and good to see you too and yeah i hate the heartless selfish ones thts why i basically said sc rew it with her meh anyhwo thanks again

  • Ghostly Theatre
    August 20, 2005
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    Well if this is a real situation, I'm very sorry you have to deal with such an asshole. People can be extremely heartless, selfish, immune to what others feel. Trust me, I know this all too well.

    None the less, good to see you around again Megz. Always a pleasure to stop and read your work. Great job, keep it up!

    Blessed Be.

    -Ghostly-

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