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My True Love

My true love
like a sweet smelling rose
as gentle as a dove
la la da la la
that's how it goes
your relationship with the one
who lives up above
it's nothing like the rest
you don't bend
like foxes have dens
and birds have nests
but the Son of man doesn't
have a place
to call his own
it's just like you and your home
you have some ups and downs
but you stick with your beautiful smile
instead of a frown
you've grown from your pain
by living life strife by strife
and dancing in the rain
even if love hurts you
and everything is wrong
you continue to hold on
and stay strong
with a long journey
ahead of you, stay strong
la la da la la
that's how it goes
my rose
my dove
my true love
continue to hold on
be strong and it won't be long
til you realize that I'm
your true love
me
you
the inner you
la la da la la

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Written August 19th, 2005

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  • Mark J McGhee
    March 25, 2006
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    nice

    very different. and cynical....


  • Xero-Cool
    August 20, 2005
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    this is awesome another great write keep the poems comeing i love your works and i really felt this inside anywas pieces im out