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sister

i would always be there
when you needed someone
always listen and care


always read your poetry
always comment
always be honest

will be there for a chat
a helping hand
no matter what
youd be special to me

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Written August 19th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • SoulWords
    September 4, 2005
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    This is short, sweet, and too the point. I liked it though. My fav. part was the last line, it seemed so honest. Great job with this and keep writing because you have talent
    Best of luck and God bless