where are you now?
is there someone else?
while im at home here
with our 2 year old little girl
and boy inside myself
i think i would die
if you ever cheated on me
wtf is goin on
are you sure this is
what you want
-a family-
i know what i want
but the question is
do you?
i want you to be home on time
and spend the rest of my life
with sherri , our baby boy, and you
-amy
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Written March 30th, 2005
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Wow girl, this is so emotional. I'm so sorry that I haven't commented on it until now. You are so wonderful and I love you to pieces. If you EVER need to talk, please just get ahold of me! I'm here for you anytime. Luv ya bunches.
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Bravo
Excellent. "Sneaky" emotional. It does, graually, build up, almost unexpectedly and nearly enough to break your heart (or mine). The short lines work amazingly well--not every one can use short lines, it is a gift, talent. Once more, a fine poem. -
This is very sad. I hope things work out.
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