i love you once
i love you twice
i love you infinitely
forever and plus infinity
really isn't enough
i cant explain anything
i choke on the air
that once made me breathe
but now all i need is you
to survive
all i need is you to breathe and sigh
you are so beautiful
in my eyes
i don't care what others think
i guess that is why i am yours and you are mine
but since this all turned out so much like a fairy tale
...
I'm not sure what to think
Author notes
Written August 19th, 2005
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thank you so much.im glad you liked it.
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I like very much how you end this piece. You put ... and then "I'm not sure what to think". This leaves a certain feeling of uncertainty to the whole thing. First you describe your amazing relationship and then you compare it to a fairy tale...I can relate.
Great write!!
~Baby Princess
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