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Cherry Hat (Acrostic)

Cherry Hat


Coming forth into this world,

Helpless and all alone.

Emerging from her cocoon,

Resplendent are her colors.

Radiant are the wings that spread.

You watch as she takes off in flight.



Her beauty recognized by everyone.

Amazing is the sweet butterfly.

Through nature's eyes we see it all.




Joyce Le Lievre (sunny day)

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Cherry Hat, I did this for you to let you know that there is beauty in everyone. Even if you don't see it right now.
You will as your future unfolds.
Written August 19th, 2005

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  • sunny day
    June 17, 2006
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    MDeaves, Thank you very much for the applause and your lovely words. Cherry Hat is a young poet on here who has since changed her author name. I did this for her when she was going by that name. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this piece. Love and blessings for you, today and always. Joyce


  • June 17, 2006
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    Really Cool

    That one I like very much, I mean, what is a cherry hat? I dunno man, but it sounds cool.

  • sunny day
    August 19, 2005
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    Hehehehehe... You are so funny. Thank you so much Nav. I do simply type as I go, unless I am going to be called away from the site by constant instant messages coming through my MSN or Yahoo. I also say pen when I am commenting so I hear ya on that. I received an IM on here from her friend and poet as well Super glue with thanks from both of them. They are having problems getting into site pages at this time but promised to visit this when they can get back in. Thank you again so much for your sincere comments and your levity.
    Always a pleasure hearing from you. Joyce


  • DamnUnique
    August 19, 2005
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    ahan! so,another acrostic from your lovely pen(oh well,it doesn't matter even if you simply type your poems but dont write them beforehand ....i'll still call it pen )
    it's such an awesome write for another poet here at AP you're sooooo kind! i bet Cherry Hat will surely cherish this beautiful work done for her...
    happy writing (yeah,i changed this last line )

  • sunny day
    August 19, 2005
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    Lana, Thank you for the applause and the wonderful comments you made. I really wanted to do something special for her and I hope it worked. Joyce


  • silver bugs
    August 19, 2005
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    Aw, this is beautiful....So peaceful, so vivid..Wow I really enjoyed it. Nature is beautiful...Just as this poem is. You did a really nice job..Keep it up.
    ~Lana

  • sunny day
    August 19, 2005
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    Thank you for the great comment sis, if you take a look at some of her works you will see why I did this for her.
    Love ya, Joyce


  • HopelessScribbles gold member
    August 19, 2005
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    awesome poem

    what a beautiful vision ,it really has a nice breeze to it..
    keep it up sis, doing mighty fine ..Love Linda(AP AND INTERNET SIS WE ARE INDEED)

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