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Not Without You

My heart
Made of glass
Shattered beyond repair
Shards splitting my soul
My love
My faith
Bleeding internally
Til nothing is left
Darkness
A void
A black hole
Now sits
Where my heart once was
Surrounded by a wall
Hiding the tears
Shadowing the pain
Swallowing the loss
Accepting the cold
Living forever
In loneliness
My anger
Covers my fear
A shell of a woman
One that once was
But is no more
And never will be again
Not without you

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Written August 18th, 2005

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  • evilscooterkitty
    June 12, 2008
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    i like it...alot

    I know this pain...more than once.


  • PerfectImperfection
    August 19, 2005
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    This is such a beautiful write! So much sadness... Well written in such an artistic flowing form. I liked this alot; filled with deep emotion. Each line so soft and yet screaming to be felt!