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~The Reason~

To thoes it may concern or who may want to learn.

  The reason why i Wont be here anymore.
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Look what you've done to me.
It's like a disease,
killing me that you left.

I'm loosing time,
i need you here.
Dont walk away,
wont you please  help me.
Will somebody come and save me.
Cuz i just can't make it here
without you.

Please come and save me.

Before i die of a broken HEART.


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Written August 18th, 2005

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  • PrettyxoxPoison
    April 9, 2007
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    :P

    aww this is sad. very good write. Thank you for entering my contest! best of luck!


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    May 24, 2006
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    A broken heart has shattered most of us at one time or another in life. The pain does fade eventually and make room for another love, but it sure feels like it never will


  • BlackBloodyRose
    August 24, 2005
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    good job

    this is soo good very intence


  • lovelovepalooza.
    August 19, 2005
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    aww, sierra. you should seriuosly start telling me what going on, cuz im gonna be meeting all these poeple that you happen to be breaking over and maybe i can help some how. just a suggestion though. nice poem (please return the favor)