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Beach Party

Salty skin like
sand between your toes
like seaweed in you hair
Like music in your head
while the frosted glass water
stings cold in your pores

Warm wind falls silent
over waves of grit dunes
pebbles tumbling into sea
rings rings spreading
recalling hushed melodies
with half-remembered harmony

rotted ocean log mingles
with sweet barbecue and
smooth guitar voices
rise like wolves' howls
to the batterd moon tune
imperfect choir

Sticky hair like
mini waves over toes
like cold soda can in your hand
like music in your head
while you sing silent
to newborn stars between palm leaves

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Written August 18th, 2005

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  • Faery of death
    August 19, 2005
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    I absoloutly LOVE this one, it was so amazing... I dont know what to say you always take my breath away with your writing.