Lies, Lies, Lies
oh my God how stupid can I be,
am I that naive.
I believed in you, I loved you.
I must love having a broken heart.
Am I that low that I can't see the light
I know you hide behind your lies,
and have your little secrets
yet day after day
you act like nothings wrong
you go along with your little life,
did you forget I'm suppose
to be a part of it
Remember the dreams and plans we had.
yeah, well I guess you forgot.
Well, you know what.........?
I've been hiding behind
my own little lies
and my own little secrets.
Cause this broken heart is moving on,
only you don't know it
.......you know why.........?
Because you are the one that is
naive and stupid.
I have better things to do
with my life.
I have better things in my life
and its not you.
I have found someone else
you're so blind you didn't see the signs
you have told me your last lie
so here it is,
plain and simple
......GOOD BYE......
Author notes
This is about an ex from years ago that to this day still pisses me off if i think about the things he did, some men can be the scum of the flea poop on a dogs hinny.
Erotik Rose
Written August 18th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Broken promisses... by Wolf Mistress.
1200 points, ended February 23, 2008, 39 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Yep...your authornotes said it all
I loved the way you described that you were having little lies too, just moving on...And that you had better things to do with your life...
Good on you
Good luck in my contest
XXJeannette
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thank you for your comment I glad you liked this.
I had learned a lesson from this whole experience. I was so happy to move on and I never looked back. Good to you with judging the contest.
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Well done girl for getting out. How I love the way some of you young women don't take no sh1t from men. I had no where to go and kept thinking it would get better and tried to hide it from the world. Fear holds you though and you believe you are unable to function. If I had my time again I would not live it, I would get out. Well done for this poem of yours full of spirit and the promise of a new future.
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Thank you for your comment, this time period in my life was a bit rough for me I was in a relationship for years but wanted to get out after the first year and didn't have the guts this guy was a butthead, an abuser, a lier, a drunk and a druggie. I really never knew what I saw in him. I found someone else during the last year of my relationship who had showed my what life was really like and I am still with him now it's been 10 years of heaven and we have 2 children I've been in hell and I will never go back I can relate to other women whom have come from abused relationships and know how hard it is to get out but there is a way and there is help out there. I hope you are not in this kind of a relationship, you can talk to me if you need to. Again thank you for your comment and i'm glad you liked it.
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Please put your AP name in authornotes...
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Whoops sorry... thats what I get for trying to be online on my laptop and having the kids jumping on my bed, but then there should be no excuse. I thank you for the warning and not the DQ....
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A wonderful sharing! I know of a few men who are just this way! I love your analogy in your author's note, lol! Thank you for sharing this and good luck to you!!!
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Such a tormented write. Hun, you seem to have so much pain in your life. He was such a jerk to make you feel like this. What kind of man, would do that.
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i liek this one .. it sure seems that there is alot of use and pain in ur life. that really sucks. i feel sad know but i hope ur life treats u better.
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really good poem describe ur feelings so well good luck in the contest
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Excellent
Very good, full of emotion even after all these years, I think it's fantastic. I'm sure there are alot of people who fell the same in way or another. If I could applaud it I would
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hey mommy good poem i really liked it , alot of feeligns put into it i can see , love much
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hehe very good write my dear, I like the flea poop on a dogs hinny part too. Keep up the good work and I love you so very much.
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so true.v gd.
hiya,
i loved this poem,probably because it is so close to how i feel about my ex.And so true about the flea-poo thing.v .gd.bye xxx
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