Walking in the darkness,
Lost in the silent chaos
Turn after trun,
No end in sight
Dazed and confused,
Swimming in unfamiliar emotions
Screaming in terror,
Crying out in fear
A place of lost souls,
Where innocense is lost
Hell has become home,
Home has become unbarable
A glimmer of light,
Shinning bright
Standing before me,
Reaching out
A piece of hope,
A touch of guidance
Lifting me up,
Holding me,
Loving me,
Guiding me,
For it is you,
My Salvation....
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Written August 18th, 2005
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This is wrote for a friend of mine who stood by my side when I was way over my head in a bad way. I don't think there would ever or could ever be a way to thank him enough. Honestly, if not for him I probably wouldn't be here today.
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This is well penned and dosent mince words its how so many feel especially at the point of impending disaster we often look for salvation and it can sustain us through hard times… well put
Paul -
I am truly glad you enjoyed it, my dear. Thank you for stopping by a second time.
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me again I can't get over this poem!!!! it is the most beautiful poem to have come across my ears I love it!!!!!
absolutely OUTSTANDING!!!!!
Chanel -
this is bautiful. sometimes I feel like my house is hell. but this was beautifully written. love it!! keep in touch. I have a few poems myself.
Chanel -
Salvation is something we all need in times trying....What gives us something we had hoped for...lost to things in our life yearned but un attained. we falt but we continue to journey for the achievements of lifes worthwhile wonders....in all we strive for daily our one and only true salvation comes as Happiness....Is this something we sometimes feel will never be achieved? or is it something hopeful to bring our minds and hearts to a final resting in belief.
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