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Make A Choice

Today I will find out if the sex wasn't for vain,

Today I will find out if you'll share your last name,

Today I will find out if you have responsibility,

and I will find out how much you really love me

because a great but sad thing has happened.

It is a part of you and me, even if you don't want it to be.

So today I'm giving you a choice,

You can be a part of a happy three,

or you can go and give up on me.

There's the choice take it or leave it,

Laugh and think it's a joke or believe it.

If you stay or even if you go,

I will not be sorry for our mistake.

Author notes

This is a fictional write but I tried to make it seem like I was the girl telling the boyfriend that he had a choice to make.
Written August 18th, 2005

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  • HisOneTrueLove6107
    August 21, 2005
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    It was my boyfriend who brought up the subject of our accidental pregnancy. He thought about what we had done in the last month or so and brought it up that I may have been pregnant. I gave him the money to go buy the tests and we took one that first night. That one came out positive... but he wanted to make sure. So the second night, we did another test. That one came out negative. We tried two more. The result of the 3rd was negative and then the fourth was broken, but positive. Soon, I started showing wicked early, so we thought it may be twins. Through this whole time, we haven't gone to see a doctor and have no clue if I am actually pregnant or not. But we are pretty sure that I am. Your welcome for the comment and I thank you again for entering my contest.
    Ashleigh

  • Changing Lanes
    August 21, 2005
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    Thank you Tears, I enjoyed thinking about it and it really was a challange for me because I can not imagine it being an easy job for a girl to tell her boyfriend about their unplanned pregnancy, however I wanted to make the girl strong because only a strong girl can say that she won't feel sorry for their mistake and she will make it with or without him.
    ttyl .


  • HisOneTrueLove6107
    August 18, 2005
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    This is a great poem. I think you did excelent, Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
    Tears