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Poetry (Acrostic)

Missing image
poets

observing

everything

to

record

yesterdays




~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

too all my s here ~~

well, you know:  

I just had to come up with something this week




Gregg

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Written August 18th, 2005

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  • lordoftherings gold member
    August 18, 2005
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    I tend to think that once it has been recorded it is already in the past because it has been written! I also knew that some would come down on me for missing today and the future: but how many words start with Y that encompasses all the time spans Gregg
    Edited on Aug 18, 3:35 p.m. because ''.

  • wil-o-wisp
    August 18, 2005
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    Yup, the picture grabbed my attention more than the poem, although it was cleverly written. I agree with a previous comment, whereby poetry should also be about today as well as looking forward to the future and not simply recording the past.

  • Shape-Shifter
    August 18, 2005
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    Funny

    LOL that was a REALLY funny picture!!!


  • Shakari
    August 18, 2005
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    I loved this piece! It really described poetry, and the piecture was funny...though different than the poem! Keep up the good work...I feel bad for the soldier! LOL! Well, keep up the good work! I love acrostics and you made this one unique! Keep it up!


  • sunny day
    August 18, 2005
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    Awesome Job!!!

    Gregg, This was awesome. I loved the one word per line action.
    It was absolutely true. Different from the usual acrostic but great none the less. I did an acrostic called Poetry as well, perhaps you will visit it and get my feelings on the meaning of it. It was not a rhyming acrostic but I felt it was what poetry means to me. Thank you for sharing this lovely write with us. Best to you. Joyce


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    August 18, 2005
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    I enjoyed it alot.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    August 18, 2005
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    fantastic

    oooh! I hope the soldier got a laugh from this pic.. cute lil one needed some relief..lol


  • -theheartofme-
    August 18, 2005
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    yesterday, today and tomorrow. IT is our job to record for the future to see the world through our eyes.


  • eternalpoet
    August 18, 2005
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    he he.. i saw this pic before.. tee hee.. lol.. its lil too much funny

    nice write.. good work.. thanks for sharing

    - vic

  • LostMyWings007
    August 18, 2005
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    hmm...different...but i like it.


  • Windworder gold member
    August 18, 2005
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    Hehehe, clever, just absolutely clever. I always enjoy a well written acrostic although I prefer acrostic lines. Again, loved the picture and the insight from the poem.

  • X- Kitten -X
    August 18, 2005
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    hehehe i love the picture!! I love the way you only use one word for each letter rather than the more commonly seen line. You've hit the nail on the head here!

    *applauds* this is bloomin' wonderful ♥ x

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