observing
everything
to
record
yesterdays
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too all my 
s here ~~well, you know:
I just had to come up with something this week
Gregg
poets
observing
everything
to
record
yesterdays
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
too all my s here ~~
well, you know:
I just had to come up with something this week
Gregg
observing
everything
to
record
yesterdays
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
too all my s here ~~well, you know:
I just had to come up with something this week
Gregg
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Written August 18th, 2005
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I tend to think that once it has been recorded it is already in the past because it has been written! I also knew that some would come down on me for missing today and the future: but how many words start with Y that encompasses all the time spans Gregg
Edited on Aug 18, 3:35 p.m. because ''. -
Yup, the picture grabbed my attention more than the poem, although it was cleverly written. I agree with a previous comment, whereby poetry should also be about today as well as looking forward to the future and not simply recording the past. -
Funny
LOL that was a REALLY funny picture!!! -
I loved this piece! It really described poetry, and the piecture was funny...though different than the poem! Keep up the good work...I feel bad for the soldier! LOL! Well, keep up the good work! I love acrostics and you made this one unique! Keep it up!
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Awesome Job!!!
Gregg, This was awesome. I loved the one word per line action.
It was absolutely true. Different from the usual acrostic but great none the less. I did an acrostic called Poetry as well, perhaps you will visit it and get my feelings on the meaning of it. It was not a rhyming acrostic but I felt it was what poetry means to me. Thank you for sharing this lovely write with us. Best to you.
Joyce
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I enjoyed it alot.
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fantastic
oooh! I hope the soldier got a laugh from this pic.. cute lil one needed some relief..lol
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yesterday, today and tomorrow. IT is our job to record for the future to see the world through our eyes.
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he he.. i saw this pic before.. tee hee.. lol.. its lil too much funny
nice write.. good work.. thanks for sharing
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hmm...different...but i like it.
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Hehehe, clever, just absolutely clever. I always enjoy a well written acrostic although I prefer acrostic lines. Again, loved the picture and the insight from the poem.
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hehehe i love the picture!! I love the way you only use one word for each letter rather than the more commonly seen line. You've hit the nail on the head here!
*applauds* this is bloomin' wonderful ♥ x
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