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The Light

A light through the darkness,
Showing me through.








The soul of another,
caught in my heart.





You guide me,
and show me your ways.






The darkness starts to shows its face,
and I'm running from the light.






But I know the way that I should live,
and the way my heart is leading me.






You've died for me,
yet I still refuse you.





Your trust that I will come back,
never fails to know.





YOu are the way, the truth, and the light,
I will live by faith and not by sight.

Author notes

I chose option 5-Write about God.
Thanks, Hannah
Written August 18th, 2005

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  • peluche
    January 26, 2006
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    When we are our most battered and torn, it is then Jesus picks us up and carries us cradled against his heart This is such beauty and wisdom from one so young, for me, at least I am going to come back tomorrow and read some more of yours I have missed!


  • SexyAngel0418
    August 21, 2005
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    WOW... This is a great poem... You did a great job with it... It is very beautiful and a great poem about God!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth

    PS good luck in the contest!!!


  • crownedjewel4Jesus
    August 18, 2005
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    Amen! I loved this piece, awesome job! I really liked how you wrote it, spacing it out. It made it seem longer, and somehow...more meaningful. Great flow, and I loved the ending, "You are the way, the truth, and the light, I will live by faith and not by sight."

    Keep on writing!