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Up to high school

Up to high school

Up to high school I'm feeling sick
I don't think I can take this risk,
What if I'm bullied its such a scare
Its like a dare or a worse nightmare,

My friends have gone to  a different school
Oh no I'm such a fool,
I should of gone with my mate
but now its all to late,

What if i don't make any friends
It will feel like school never ends,
My head is spinning
My legs are shaking,

Its the first day of school
Please cut me some slack,
My school bag is ready and  packed
Please someone wake me up from this horrible dream before I scream!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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hello hope you liked it
Written August 18th, 2005

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  • airius
    October 25, 2005
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  • airius
    October 25, 2005
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    (grin)

  • airius
    October 25, 2005
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    thanks


  • Chi-Chi
    August 18, 2005
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    bravo

    This is a really good and funny poem. I dont think it intends to be humorous though but it is. This is exactly how I felt on my first day of high school. Except that I still havnt found the guts to write about it yet.Hee Hee!