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Transformation

Sky
Gray Light
Darkening
Mystifying
Depressed Atmosphere
Awakening
Clarify
Blue Sky
Peace

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Written August 18th, 2005

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  • Capital
    September 9, 2005
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    very interesting, like it, never read anything quit elike it. keep up with the originality...it is very good!