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Snuggling by the Fire

The fire’s glow reflects on your face.
Tears form in my eyes as I stare
At the beauty I see,
Wondering why
This lovely creature is near me.

My hand moves toward your face.
Softly I caress your cheek.
I smile with pleasure,
Wondering why
You offer me this treasure.

I see tears descending from you eyes.
My fingers move beneath
To wipe them dry,
Wondering why
You smile with delight and cry.

My hand caresses down your hair
Until it rests on you shoulder.
My fingers tingle with desire,
Wondering why
My soul burns with fire.

I draw you in closer to me
Bringing my hand to your posterior.
My face snuggles in close,
Wondering why
This passion in us arose.

My face snuggles next to yours.
I feel the warmth
Of your skin,
Wondering why
Your tender heart let me in.

My hand gently moves along your back.
My heart rejoices with pleasure,
Feeling you near me,
Wondering why
You freely give this delight to me.

We sit and cuddle by the fire
For hours that pass like minutes
Not saying a word
Wondering why
Through simple touch, love is loudly heard.

Author notes

I have a fire place and dream of one day snuggling like this.
Written August 18th, 2005

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 18, 2005
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    excellent~

    Oh so beautiufl
    I could just envison this one.....sometime sex isn't everything
    It's just the closeness and the holding of hands and letting someone feel that kindess and devotion
    Beautiful hun and good luck in the contest
    Love n hugs
    Susan~~~

  • pinksneakers
    August 18, 2005
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    Great job on this, and good luck in the contest.


  • Midnight Lace
    August 18, 2005
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    WoW! This is just..beautiful..and so perfect. I love the pciture you have painted in my mind through your words of tenderness and adoration. This made me smile and sigh. You have done a wonderful job. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for taking the time to enter. Best wishes to you.
    Midnight

  • poet on skis
    August 18, 2005
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    this is an excellent poem i love the repeating line "wondering why" the ryhme kinda skiped a littel toward the end but i think it worked out better that way. i think it really explains true love very well. great job