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Bunny Hating

Deep in agony you rot like carcass
Angry at the unforgivable past
The eyes of the devil I see in you
Persuasion and threats audible to the ears
Silenced death staring at evil
Penetrated into the dark heart
Rain from undeciferable eyes
Paralyzed still with broken bones

Author notes

This is about my abusive cheating dirty ex-boyfriend. I hope he has a disease now! YUP!
Written August 18th, 2005

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  • beebee2003
    August 26, 2005
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    I'M SORRY TO HEAR THAT, GOD BLESS, GOOD POEM thanks for entering

    beth