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Scattered Bodies

To your scattered bodies
Non-existent clarity
The sky is green
Multiple capsules and pills
Imprisonment
Photonic disease
Lack of natural light
Collective converse
Desired isolation
Fantasy of death
Mash of joy
To your scattered bodies go

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Written August 18th, 2005

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  • Flipsidebabee
    August 18, 2005
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    Finally someone gets it!!! THANKS!


  • PseudoVoid
    August 18, 2005
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    This is nice, it reminds me of Absinth and other assorted drugs.
    ~Master~


  • TourniquetofBlood
    August 18, 2005
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    Well, I'll admit, I'm confused, but it's good. Not many things can confuse a vamp like me, but you managed. Anyways, great write.