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Sensual Pleasure

Give me your drug
I'm so addicted
Stick it in me
Don't pull it away

Fuck me over
I'm feeling dizzy
Extremely excited
As sweat rolls down

I sense it in my cells
Floating in midair
Vision is indistinct
Mind is corrupted

The flashes in my body
Chills down my spine
Evil smile
I have won over you

Author notes

This poem was written during the time when I was sexually exporative. Enjoy!
Written August 18th, 2005

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  • darkness comes
    August 19, 2005
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    excellent

    excellent write my friend. I know how we crave the drug. I have an addiction although a little different than mosts but she is my addiction all the same. I hope to read more from you in the future.

  • jonathan-s-grant
    August 18, 2005
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    i believe you meant, " sexually expLorative. " sweetie.
    don't forget the " L " is very, very, very important to pronounce. . .especially when it comes to oral sex, cuz' there are excercises, " lalalallalalaaah! " hehe. . .anyway, your poem was great! i admire that you can write and not force rhyme, or rather, you don't need it. at least not in this poem. It was VERY HOT! made me stand at attention, i'll tell you. But what I really liked, was how you describe it as an addiction. . .for me, I feel the same. Maybe we're soulmates.

  • KennaB
    August 18, 2005
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    Hott

    Awesome!!!!! Very hott!!! Almost need to take a breath after that lol. Great job. Enjoyed reading that. Sometimes there`s nothing like a good ole` sex poem to cheer you up. lol. Great write!!!