Now and forever we will be apart
No tears for you from my heart
I tried to see the same in yours eyes too
But no sadness in your eyes' dew.
We are the strangers, I see it again,
With no love, forgot to be friends.
I am not going to cry deep and loud
Never more together, neither in crowd.
Years comes like a wall between us
With no chance to open our hearts
No more talking, nothing to share
No more breaths, I do not dare.
Nowadays amongst the friends, with fears
We can’t share anything, no tears.
You are not going to ask for a dance
We lost our chance, our last romance.
I have no reason for smiles
Teardrops
Heart beats
All because of
Last chance
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Written August 18th, 2005
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Thank you queen jezabel for your nice comment.
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wow, deep emotions, full of pain, sadness and love at the same time. beautiful.
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First thing I hope and pray you can get over this guy, because I know it's hard. Second, wonderful poem!! Your sadness was so well expressed through your words, I felt a rift grow in my heart. This poem is a beautiful example of just letting your feelings flow onto the paper.
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Thank you Shannon
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Well this is nicely written. Thank you for entering. ~~Shannon~~
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Thanks Jecks. Yes,it is a little different.
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Very asad and yet I sense other layers as well.
Intersting format, I have a bit of trouble with the flow, but I think its just that I'm not used to it.
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Thank you Di for you valuable comment anf good wishes. Thanks for applause.
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Hi, a very lovely but sad poem, when I think that English is not your mother tongue it makes it even more beautiful,all the best my friend in the comp, you have my applause, hugs Di
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My love are my verses and the world of poetry. Do I need more? Maybe I will find out one day.
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Thank you anna...Never give up of your last chance...
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Sonja this is a wonderful poem with such thoughts and concepts.How sad. I could feel the sadness in your words. I hope happiness will come and you will find joy. You are a very expressive writer. well done. -
touching
im glad I took time to read this. Its sad and touching but i dont like happy endings unless the people make u sad when they're apart. well I can relate to this...who can't??
good work. I'll even give u a clap clap!!
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Thank you for your very, very nice and valuable comment.
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wow. i'm so glad i decided to read this. it is so freaken sad but so lovely in the same, slightly twisted, way of mine. anyway, what i wanted to say was OH MY GOD, I LOVED IT! and so there, I said it. love it and of course you. great write, and you gotta keep on tracking, i gotta read more of your stuff.
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