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Crimson Tears

Silent cries
Echoing in the night
Falling upon
Deaf ears
As heads turn
Refusing to see
The horror play
Before their eyes
Backs turn
They walk away
Ignoring
And ashamed
Feelings of helplessness
Fill their souls
As she lay
Upon the floor
A bloodied mess
Crying
Crimson tears
The last time
She fell victim
To his drunken rage

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Written August 17th, 2005

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  • Snappy - Doodles
    July 1, 2006
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    This was one powerful write. I liked it, straight to the point. The flow was excellent. The ending was nice too. One nice piece.


  • LolaUnscripted
    August 17, 2005
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    very good write!!