My love was unconditional,
Now it has conditions.
I gave you everything I had,
And you ripped it away and stomped on it.
You tore my heart out and watched it bleed.
Now you want "us" back,
How do I or you fix what you have destroyed?
Is it possible to revive what we once had?
Is my love gone forever?
Can it ever be repaired?
I want to trust you again.
But is it ever possible?
I want to love again,
But am I able?
Only time will tell.
Author notes
I went through a rough time last year and this is how I felt. Sometimes it is hard to forgive the people that hurt you but if you love them then you must forgive and move on. I've chosen to continue loving.
Written August 10th, 2005
A contest entry
- oh I say loads of choice!!! by CrazyWomanimal.
300 points, ended September 11, 2005, 48 entries
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I think maybe rather than to continue loving its more to continue living with love I dunno I'm an analystic person lol another really good write with true raw emotion keep up the good work Crazy xxx
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Thanks Dylan I appreciate it!!
Love the name by the way! take care sweetie, ~Angel~
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Wow Ivory, I don't know what to say. Thanks for your honesty here but what do you mean? Any suggestions? I was very angry when I wrote this and it was how I was feeling at the time but if you can tell me how to improve please do all suggestions are welcome. Take care, ~Angel~
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Thanks so much Jaime for your comment! You know in your heart when it is time to move on. I am so glad you found someone! Take care, ~Angel~
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Thank you so much healing tree I really appreciate it. Take care, ~Angel~
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I am so sorry to here that twf and yes things have worked out for me. Thank you so much for your comment and never give up hope on love. Love is powerful! Take care, ~Angel~
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oops spelt your name wrong. Sorry
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Oh you can never give up on love twisted!! Life is so lonely without it!! But I am so glad you opened yourself back up and found a reason to love! take care ~Angel~
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Thank you Lovessuicide for your comment. This piece was very hard for me to write because I had so many emotions flowing at the time and the pain was fresh but I decided to forgive because I love him so much. Take care, ~Angel~
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ahhh..i love this...almost as much as the beautiful angels poem...you have a wonderful talent..thanks for the opportunity to read your works.....
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The emotion that you are trying to portray is not coming out as strongly as it could. The poem lacks a lot in flow, and also lacks in wrod choice. The message is an intresting one, but the poem itself requires a lot of work.
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wonderful
really good peice...as much as i hate to say it ive been through the same thing... i on the other hand chose to move on cuz the jerk was using me..know i have found a new love and i hope yours works out great wonderful write you express yourself great...J
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A real moving piece. I like the flow and the way
you embrace the reader. Great job !!! -
I'm going through the same thing right now
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smart choice...at one point i did give up on love...but it was just too lonely...so... i decided to giv it one last shot...and am i glad i did. im now with the most wonderful person i could ever hope for. im glad i decided to love again. this poem is soooo inspiring...i love it! keep up the great writing!
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Deep write & very personal. I loved it. I know how this is. Yea, your right you just have to forgive them in the end. Great flow & beautiful piece. Keep it up & never ever give up.
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Thanks Nick for the comment it is greatly appreciated.!!
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wow love it alot! gr8t job keep it up!!
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Woooow, very dark and deep, I know this exact feelings, and it really does hurt, to think you loved a person, and they stab you in the back, awesome write, keep it up
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