There's so much love flowing through my veins
For you and only you
This fierce beating in my heart,
Is for you and only you
You make my life complete
You touch me to my soul
But so many things have happened
Far beyond my control
I want to love whole heartedly
I want to trust completely
But you have caused such pain
I'm scared to open up again
And fear is all to blame
You have to prove your love to me
You have to give it all
ALL your heart
ALL your mind
Especially ALL your soul
For us to heal and be complete
These are all things you must do
For only YOU can make me open up again
YOU and ONLY you.
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Written August 17th, 2005
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I'm clicking on the link sweetie and it isn't letting me in. Let me know the name and I will go check it out. Take care, ~Angel~
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Thank you so much carmel apple!
Your comment is greatly appreciated! Take care and God bless, ~Angel~
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this beautiful poem inspired me to finally get out my pain, and write a poem that has been incubating and growing in me for several days (allpoetry.com/Poem/1538021), thank you!
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Very unique. Very interresting I enjoyed it very much.
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Thank you so much silver your comment I truly appreciate it. This was a hard one to write but I had to get it out the pain was to deep to ignore I am glad you enjoyed it. Take care, ~Angel~
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Thank you so much Lady for your comment it is greatly appreciated I am glad you enjoyed it. By the way I love your quote: "Stop the world I want to get off" It is to cute! God bless, ~Angel~
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this is so beautiful & it touches me very deeply right now. i don't know waht else to say; i was drawn to click it and now i see why. i love the twist: it seems like it will just be a garden-variety love poem, then you turn it around, and it becomes one of pain, and then hope and invitation to heal.
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good work with the repitition and awesome poem in general.
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Thank you so much asufellow for your comment. Only he holds my heart even after everything that has happened. Your comment is greatly appreciated. Take care, ~Angel~
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"You and only you..." I love how you used this line over and over, it really got your point across. This is something that everyone can relate to and I hope that you can over come it. Writing really helps me and I hope that it has helped you. Keep up the good work and remember time is the healer of all wounds.
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Thank you TessAyn for your comment it is greatly appreciated and yes it takes time to trust again and I am STILL working on it. It is hard to get over the pain. Thank you again, ~Angel~
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Thank you so much Brokenpen for your comment. You got exactly what I was saying.
I am so glad you enjoyed it. Take care, ~Angel~
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Great job.
Really like this. All of us have been hurt at one time or another. Trust is something that takes time to rebuild. Keep writing. -
awesome write
wow this was painfully beautiful .. reading this at the start this was a love dedication then i got to the part where it said you have hurt me so many times and it turned me up side down..and then went back explainine your love still there come and get it but love me the right kind of way. i loved it the flow was greatawesome write i loved it. thank you for sharing your words with me... -
Very beautiful, I like your choice of imagery. : ) Nice Work
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